Fairly short, but in this case it isn't a bad thing, you knew just when to stop. It's hard to make something short that some one will want to listen to over and over again. I'm guilty of that, seeing as it's atleast the 14th time through.
Drum lines are awesome, not the same one repeating. It has a pretty good amount of variation, favorite part is around 00:36.
There's fuzziness that Industrial typically has, but you didn't over-do it (aka make it sound like nails in a blender).
the melody is probably the most captivating part of this song. it's varied, but not freestyle. The melody isn't something you stole from somebody else, a lot of people go for something that's ALREADY become popular, like from Cheshyre or Waterflame. I honestly can't compare it to anybody's music as far as melody goes.
As far as compatibility with the type of flash, it would fit with any kind of action game or movie. Placement would work in almost any part of a game or movie, it could be in the credits, the intro, the menu, a fight scene, or any other intense part.
This is something I'm going to come back to and download. I truthfully don't think anything needs to be changed, but who knows, a different version could end up twice as awesome. I hope I hear more music from you in the future :)
Thanks for your detailed review, I appreciate it! ;D
I tried playing it with my guitar, and it sounded very good, but I haven't been able to get the right sound yet. I recorded it several times, but although it sounded a lot more aggressive and powerful than the original version, it was far away from perfect. I hope I'll get it done some day, though.
This is made of more than just epic win
started looking through the Industrial submissions for songs I could draw along with, which implies that I didn't read the author comment, at first. As it got going around 1:10 I was thinking "Hmm... robots?" then at 1:40 I was like "YES ROBOTS". This is probably the most ear holding and mind captivating songs I've ever heard. I hope you win :D this sounds like it had quite a bit of effort put into it.
Thanks for one of the greatest review I ever got :) I didn't place in the contest, but as I said, I got very nice feedback from listeners, and that is the WIN my friend ;) Thanks for listening and reviewing... cya !
The beat in the beginning makes me think of an introduction scene, that's my favorite part. Later when it goes on, it gets a little "fuzzy". Maybe try a compressor of some sort? I'd keep working on it. It seems to have a lot of potential.
I liked how subtle it was, and that it wasn't over done. It seems like it would fit in well enough with a game that you don't get distracted by the music and well... die. It didn't blow my ears off of my head, so kudos for that too. Nothing really scratchy or menacing, stayed nice the whole way through and was very upbeat. Nice job, keep up the good work :)
I like the feel of it. And the screams are killer. It did go from quiet to loud at some points, though. Loved it overall, Keep up the great work.
Well the dramatic changes are our thing. lol.
Is that audio clip from an actual movie????
Sure does sound like it! Like it would be from Night of the Living Dead or the like. I really like the sounds you used, it's different. Excellent job, this is one the most awesome pieces I've heard on newgrounds. Keep it up, your work is really great.
I can't tell you where its from (for certain reasons) but thanks for the comments, it seems alot of my older material is getting more attention than my old stuff hahaha oh well, glad you liked :)
It's not at all bad for 5 minutes worth of work. It would probably make an awesome full track if you changed the bass up a little bit or had the bass morph through the song. I really like it though, and the name fits too :)
Im actually thinking about it. Im starting a silly industrial project with a fellow bandmate so who knows might be a serious song one day
Reminds me of giant robots, or yes a factory. Keep up the great work, I really enjoyed this piece :D
Good to hear, stay posted as im constantly updating this page ;)
It seems to kick into action for me around 25
Wasn't huge on the very beginning, but it picks up and runs pretty smoothly. A bit tranceish in a way, but a good way at that. It would fit very well into many flash submissions, and it inspires me. Maybe when my animate skills are better than a 5 year old's, I'll use it XD nice work though, I hope to hear more from you ^^
tx, I'd be happy to see one of my submissions in a flash submission :)
It's not a bad song.
It's just a little bit repetitive and seems to be missing something. But it has a nice effect overall, favorite part was probably around 1:25. Keep up the good work, I really enjoy listening.
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